1:00pm
Improv Story Telling
Guests:
Allison Lonsdale (Erotic SF, fantasy, and horror. Singer.), Terry
Pratchett (Discworld Series author), Tad Williams (Writer Guest
of Honor--author of two series and one stand alone), Phil Foglio
(SF, comics, gaming, art)
This
was a total hoot! Terry Pratchett is a ham and Tad Williams was
pretty funny as well. For a complete transcript of the actual
improv story, see Melanie Fletcher's comments on this panel. Too
funny. And, I'm happy to say, I was actually able to give a suggestion
on this one. An old in-joke with my hubby and some of his gamer
friends -- biker nuns. Heh.
Terry
Prachett kept setting Tad Williams up with the most horrific plot
spots. Not that Tad wasn't doing as mercilessly a thing
to Phil Foglio. Heh. And Terry kept bringing back the nuns! Whoohoo!
Titles
given for the insanity created during the panel:
1.
Talking About my Grill
2.
Eight Legs into Danger
3.
90 Minutes of Death
4.
Things to do in Baker, Ca with a Cat
Yes,
saw cut throat story making live!
2:30pm Getting a TV Series off the Ground
Guests:
George RR Martin (Writer, story editor for Twilight Zone, story-consultant),
David Gerrold (Trouble with Tribbles, Land of the Lost, Writer,
script writer), Craing Engler (General Manager of SciFi.com and
of Sci Fi Magazine), Craig Miller (Award winning author/illustrator),
William C Dietz (20+ SF novels)
How
is a series sold?
1.
Work up the idea and where it will be in the middle of second
season. If you can do this, then you can see if you have something
that can go somewhere.
2.
Write up an outline on the characters and the stories to be told.
(Basically how many stories can you tell before you hit the evil
twins episode or resort to the couple having a baby.) Jumping
the Shark--coined phrase from the Happy Days episode where the
show took a left turn and Fonzie jumped over a shark on his surfboard.
Thought to be the turning point where the series is going down.
For an example for us to follow through, the idea for the show
was called Amazon Babes in Space (or something like this).
3.
Put together a presentation. (Already dinged with an editorial
change as the name gets shortened to Space Sluts.) If the story
is from something which already exists, you've already gotten
the artist/writer talked into wanting to do this and reserving
the rights. (Otherwise the TV people might go behind your back!)
4.
Go to a channel with the presentation, picking one the show would
be suitable for. Possibly prearrange some of the backing, financing,
basically the attached auspices. Can the studio make the show,
are these people capable. (There's no real cookie cutter method
on how shows are arrived at or pitched.)
5.
How do you get financing? Germany has law that facilitate them
doing such things--one of the reasons a lot of projects are backed
by them. Canada also has a lot of laws to help, giving tax breaks
which turn into subsidies for show creation. Quebec is even better
as you get the Canadian benefit and you get a loan based on the
subsidy amount. With ∏ the cost plus the exchange rate benefits
you could do a $300K show for $100K. Then get German money! The
standard cost for a show is about $1m per episode. On something
financed like the above, the Sci Fi Channel would only have to
pay $300K.
6.
For Hollywood sales, you'd talk to an agent, figure out how to
pitch it and who to pitch it to. Decide whether you'd go straight
to the channel or the studio. The studio normally sells the stuff
to the channel as a backer. And Agent will also see if they can
do a package deal--the show plus a specific director or actors,
and they too get dragged to the meetings.
7.
The Pitch or Dance for Grandma: You never know who you're going
to see or what kind of mood their in or even if they know anything
about what you are there to see them about. Pigeon toe it to a
previous show to give a quick understanding of the project. A
lot of meetings happen just to talk to people and not because
there is any actual interest. It's all about making contacts,
fishing, testing the waters. The meetings are often used to get/give
a sense of self. Showing your front. Everyone wants people who
are easy to work with.
8.
So the network buys the pitch and okays a pilot. Now you write
a draft and this gets given to the network and all other parties
involved. They all send back notes for changes. The title gets
changed again. (This seems almost inevitable and occurs multiple
times.) It is now called Rocket Babes. If the pilot flies, then
they will talk series. If the tons of notes are ignored, they
may kick you off the project and have someone else write it--that
is unless you're big enough to hand a finished script upfront.
Count on any number of drafts.
9.
Channels pick 1 out of every 10 ideas or 1 out of every 50 to
film a pilot. Name change again to Big Red Rocks (something having
nothing to do with the show). Big Red Rocks goes to film. Though
the decision was made in Jan, they don't tell you till May, and
the need the finished product by Sept. Casting needs to be done,
some of the people in the original package may have moved on.
You try to recast and the network doesn't like the choices. They
try to make suggestions (more like commands) until you reach some
kind of compromise or you give in. (The example was the network
pushing Jud Reingold (sp?) to play the lead 3 breasted babe.)
You do the pilot as a sample, except they give you a much larger
budget for it than you'd actually have for the show. They also
let you have your director only for this one time. (Pilot directors
and show directors are considered different breeds.) If you didn't
get a director as part of the package, they'll want to change
your pick.
10.
You shoot the pilot! Lots of things happen during filming, you
go over budget, you get a composer to do the rough cut, you screen
it and get more notes. (Suicide rate in Hollywood is higher than
just about anywhere else.)
11.
The pilot gets delivered to the network with other pilots completed.
The network then watches them. Then they do the testing and focus
groups on them. Little of the testing has value but they love
to do those. They grab crowds off the street and show them the
pilot. No though is given as to who these people are or if they
even like the genre. Then the ask the audience what they thought
of the pilot. (Some get shown over and over again with different
commercials.) And if the people don't like it… (Sci Fi Channel
doesn't do testing.) Focus Groups: this are groups of people are
either SF fans, not SF fans but like SF, basically a focused group
of people.
12.
The media now gets info on what's going on good or bad.
13.
If everything bombs, the pilot is pulled and you now can go shopping
around and try to sell it. It's now an orphan. Life just got harder.
14.
If they like it, they'll order about 13 episodes or make more
changes to the series and this can lead to reshoots, or backup
scripts. Usually will use it as a mid season replacement. Might
also pay for 6 scripts but not shoot them, then go from there.
4:00pm
Squishing the Notes
Guests:
Chelsea Quinn Yarbro (Known for her St Germain vampire series,
has sold more than 70 books and 60 novels of shorter fiction),
Kim Stanley Robinson, Seanan McGuire (Published poet, magazine
columnist, vocalist and author), Peter Heck
Panel
discussing music in books and how to portray it.
Things
forgotten about music in books--instruments need tuning. They
are affected by changes in temperature. Singing is a physical
workout, exhausting.
It
is hard to write about music. It gets worse if the writer has
no idea how to play music. It's like transcribing a difficult
language. There are several main tactics you can use to get music
on the page.
1.
Technical description of the music
2.
Context of the music--the concert began, amps blew out
3.
Metaphorical--my veins filled with glorious wonder…
4.
Stream of consciousness from the performers POV
5.
Mention names of actual pieces so the reader fills that in. This
only works for the near future, current music would more than
likely not survive to the future aside from possibly classical.
6.
Physical manifestations from listening to the music--goose bumps,
foot tapping.
A
mix of the above work well, but it is still unsatisfying. The
panel members as a whole felt the task to be impossible.
Brahms,
in their opinion, has a lot to teach writers from the structure
to his music. Like themes in music, passages can be used in a
novel subliminally in the work to evoke emotion. Writing itself
is like music, for it has its own rhythm and pace.
5:30pm Ethical Systems in Alien Societies
Guests:
Keith Hartman (Fiction and non-fiction writer), Sheila Finch (Linguist.
Has published 7 novels and more than 30 short stories, also teaches
writing), Vera Nazarian (short story fiction, 1 novel)
This
one almost got ugly. Luckily it was stemmed off before it went
far. Just defining ethical proved problematic. So they picked
what they were going to go by as the definition and went from
there.
Ethical
Systems--How do you decide? Humans--philosophy determines a lot
of culture and religion. Some cultures' lack of religion was determined
the same way. Different social factors will change results. What
does society consider right and wrong? Moral mindset and personal
understanding of what is convenient. Science of judging actions.
What
types of things would make a difference in an ethical system?
1.
Philosophy
2.
Importance of components. A drone might not matter if killed as
long as its DNA was not being used to further the species otherwise
it would be considered murder.
3.
Biology--instincts--but don't forget some of these are overridden
with progress.
4.
Religious beliefs
5.
Hunting Strategy--Is the race the hunter of the hunted? Pack tendencies,
solitary? Gatherer.
Can
a society evolved without the concept of a higher being? None
of Earth's developed that way, though later in a civilization's
growth they might be ditched as in a number of current ones here.
An
empty sky at night--how would this change the philosophy of an
emerging society since no lights in the sky would lead them to
think that is where the deities live?
Right
and wrong--specified by what is best for the survival of the species.
History shows many cases of this.
Ethics
rise to support the race depending on the enviroment. Male/female
balance. Languages. Inability for certain types of mental thinking.
Survival is the biggest key and promoter of beliefs/ethics. Lack
of food or food surplus, weather, longevity of life, desire for
patterns, logic. Do we dehumanize others when the need arises?